Pros and Cons of
Automated Editing—a Discussion of AutoCrit
In the continuing saga of preparing a book for Kindle Scout,
let’s talk about editing for self-publishing. This could also apply to editing
for submissions, since you need to have your book in squeaky-clean shape before
you start submitting to publishers (I know a good number of people who don’t
believe this, but that’s for another post…).
If you’re like me, the idea of getting a book in solid shape
for self-pub is a bit intimidating. I edit for other people on the side, but I
have very little faith in myself to find my own mistakes. I know my manuscripts
generally go to the editor far cleaner than many of the manuscripts I edit for
other publishers, but there are still mistakes—typos, weirdness generated by
Dragon Dictate when I use it, and of course the dreaded continuity issues.
Ideally, before you self-pub a book, you should send it to a
professional editor. This can get pricey, though—I’m not sure I could afford
myself as an editor right now, and my rates are really low. Nathan Lowell beat me
to the punch in talking about using beta readers to crowdsource your editing in
his article Bootstrap Your Book.
The methods he discusses here are very useful and effective. If you’re lucky,
you maybe have a proofer or editor on your list from a publisher you’ve worked
with before who might be willing to give your manuscript a gander for a low
cost. My group of proofers includes a fellow author I’ve edited for years as
well as a proofer/editor from one of my publishers. It pays to make friends in
this industry… Bartering can work, too—if you feel confident about your
abilities to find typos or point out continuity issues, work out a trade with
another author. Or offer large quantities of chocolate.
In any case, since Nathan covered the bases of crowdsourced
editing, I’m going to talk about another low-cost approach—automated editing.
Wait, wait—don’t run off. I have Important Things to Say.
I’m sure you’ve heard of Grammarly, which is a site where
you can upload your manuscript and have it spit out a number of different
grammar issues regarding your manuscript. I haven’t used this site, but I’ve
used AutoCrit, which I believe is similar. I’m going to discuss my experiences,
what automated editing can and can’t do, how it’s helped me, and why it might
be worth looking into.
I stumbled across AutoCrit by accident. I’d gotten a
sponsored email from Writer’s Digest with a free offer for a short video course
on creating dialogue. I have a tendency to grab and hoard free things (SHINY!
SHINY! FREE!), so I grabbed the course. I didn’t notice at the time, but it was
from the AutoCrit website. They started sending me emails offering me a GREAT
DEAL on a year-long membership to their site. After deleting several of these,
I finally thought okay, wait. I’ve got a manuscript I need to get cleaned up.
Let’s go sign up for the 7-day free trial and see what this puppy can do.
So I did that. I then uploaded Call Me Zhenya—all 93,000 words—onto the site and let AutoCrit do
its magic. It generated about ten reports, which I then downloaded and looked
over.
There are, of course, limits to what this kind of editor can
do. It’s best to ignore a lot of the advice it produces, much like it’s best to
ignore most of the green squiggly lines MS Word automatically generates to tell
you you’ve committed a grammar infraction.
HOWEVER.
The reports I got from AutoCrit found a good number of
things I had obviously missed on the forty quadrillion editing runs I’d done on
my own. The report on “ly” adverbs was particularly enlightening (My name is
Katriena and I am an adverb-aholic). It also found some typos I’d missed and
put my horrible word repetition habit into stark relief. (Seriously? 1600
repetitions of “quietly?” Good grief, woman!)
I wasn’t quite as on board with the reports that supposedly
showed me show vs. tell writing. The parameters they used didn’t seem realistic
to me, as they were mostly keyed to certain verb tenses. The passive verbs
report seemed equally arbitrary. I do, however, feel like the time I spent
going through the reports and sifting out repeated words, typos, and adverbs was
well spent. I also took the plunge and bought the discounted year’s
subscription. It seemed like a reasonable price, though I probably would have
balked at a full-price subscription.
Overall, I thought it proved to be a good addition to my
self-pub repertoire, since it found a good many things a proofreader would have
marked up. That means I can send a much cleaner version to the actual humans
who read the story later, and that can only be a good thing.
For those who might be curious, the reports AutoCrit
provides are:
- Adverbs in Dialogue Tags
- Adverbs Overall
- Clichés
- Generic Descriptions
- Passive Verbs
- Redundancies
- Sentence Starters
- Show vs. Tell Indicators
- Unnecessary Filler Words
You can run these one at a time or all in one fell swoop.
You can also decide whether to get a high-level report or a detailed report
that shows you exactly where all the noted transgressions are located in the
manuscript. This can be in a list form, or highlighted on a copy of your
manuscript. You can upload a few pages, a chapter, or the whole manuscript for
evaluation.
Overall, I did find AutoCrit useful, and I think it provided a good way to spot some issues I would have otherwise missed.
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